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Lesson of the Day by ~5-7x28mm:icon5-7x28mm:

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~The Lesson of the Day~

The lesson has begun
And her head sinks to my shoulder
Softly rubbing against my arm
It makes me feel that much older
The instructor tries to teach
While I grow that much bolder
Her eyes seem to preach
The sweetest confession of all

And she was all I wanted...

Her finger pokes my side
I can't resist her smile
The scent of her presence
Could capture from a mile
I gladly offer my hand
Those lips to beguile
'I love you', the wrong words
I keep to myself and my own

But she was all I needed...

The time for reflection
And she's holding my hand
The ink stains my skin
Like her tears in the sand
The picture she drew
So simple and grand
It seems too good to be
Just a day with a Gemini

And she's what I'll never have...
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Submitted: February 22, 2007
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Taken from my old dA account...I just miss this person again. ):

I wrote this like a year ago so it isn't very good, but I don't want to change it...
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~Larentia-Ariadne:iconLarentia-Ariadne: Feb 22, 2007, 12:28:51 AM
The time for reflection
And she's holding my hand
The ink stains my skin
Like her tears in the sand
The picture she drew
So simple and grand
It seems too good to be
Just a day with a Gemini

For some reason I really (still) love that part.






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~5-7x28mm:icon5-7x28mm: Feb 22, 2007, 12:30:33 AM
:) Awww...thanks.

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"Those who would give up liberty for security deserve neither."
~5-7x28mm:icon5-7x28mm: Feb 22, 2007, 12:31:11 AM
:hug:

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"Those who would give up liberty for security deserve neither."
~blackhearted7x:iconblackhearted7x: Feb 22, 2007, 12:33:32 AM
that is a very good poem i like it

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the hours are breathing faint and low and when amid no earthly moans, down down that town shall settle hence hell rising from a thousand thrones shall do it reverance.
~5-7x28mm:icon5-7x28mm: Feb 22, 2007, 12:48:12 AM
:cuddle:

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"Those who would give up liberty for security deserve neither."
~5-7x28mm:icon5-7x28mm: Feb 22, 2007, 12:53:31 AM
Thanks. :)

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"Those who would give up liberty for security deserve neither."
*jeregrettebcoup:iconjeregrettebcoup: Feb 22, 2007, 10:05:37 AM
This was beautiful. It doesn't need changing. :aww:
~5-7x28mm:icon5-7x28mm: Feb 22, 2007, 10:07:38 AM
Aw, thanks. :)

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"Those who would give up liberty for security deserve neither."
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